To simple and little bit monotonous, to long. Overal not bad.
Remind me on 'Don't worry Be happy' ;)
but, Drum line is too much loud in regard to everything else. Lower it for at least 15% from current dB.
Yo ma Man, this is totally Ok. If I had heard this in some cafe or chill party, I would never say that this is the amateurish work.
And few constructive advices, for future works:
In this kind of Genre (also in all other) you'll need to bring a little bit more variety.
For example: some extra melody, more transition parts, experimentation-improvisation parts etc...
Yes, it is Repetitive but not to much boring. But, hearing this more times (over 5) it starting to be a boring repetition and little bit monotonous, like a techno.
Production is Ok. Pro ;)
P.S. I actually smoked one of those funny cigs while typing this review.
If you didn't heard this you better search on YT for:
The In Crowd - Back a yard, cactus/long version '78.
thx for the tips.. my mindset here was to keep it simple but it ended up a bit too simple :)
Sry ma man, i late seven years, just to say, this track make me laughing from my heart, very funny stuff, in positive sense of course ;)
howww coouuulddd yoooouuuu *fading away voice*
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